Better. Much better.
For the curious, I’ve posted the opening to the novel at my NaNoWriMo page right here under “Novel Information”. You will notice that 1.) it ain’t as funny as this blog and 2.) it isn’t conclusive. I was afraid the last bit would happen, but, there you go.
Interesting beginning – with only a couple of grammatical errors. I believe you’re on to something here…
Only a couple of grammatical errors? Only a couple?
Oh God oh God oh God!
Best draft evah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I like it, too, but for whatever reason, it’s hard going.
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